tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post1517047897509894135..comments2023-10-17T05:31:45.922-07:00Comments on No Excuses - Musings of a Procrastinator: Saturday Centus - Eerinessnoexcuseshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14149834972952594159noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-18866431933768793642011-02-21T12:12:56.893-08:002011-02-21T12:12:56.893-08:00Another beautifully written 'cliff-hanger'...Another beautifully written 'cliff-hanger'! Please let us know what happens!<br />Best wishes,<br />Anna<br />P.S.<br />I'm sorry that I am commenting so late. I am going back to older posts that I have missed.<br />Here is my SC-text:<br /><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/01/mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday-centus-week_29.html" rel="nofollow"> 'Infrequent visitor' SC week 39</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-15205361844829592062011-02-08T17:54:07.953-08:002011-02-08T17:54:07.953-08:00Love the perfect amount of suspense you captured h...Love the perfect amount of suspense you captured here in this wonderful little gem of a story.<br /><br />I liked this soooo much!Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-17844121707987338462011-02-07T00:46:33.333-08:002011-02-07T00:46:33.333-08:00I'm intrigued! Good job!I'm intrigued! Good job!gaelikaahttp://gaelikaa-writeaway.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-31392442444258714642011-02-04T07:23:47.109-08:002011-02-04T07:23:47.109-08:00I'm caught up in the suspense of this well wri...I'm caught up in the suspense of this well written piece. Your concrete images make it easy to form a picture of the whole scene.<br /><br />Thanks for a good one..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://theredsweater.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-77110458835525014972011-02-03T20:14:28.067-08:002011-02-03T20:14:28.067-08:00This sounds like a great beginning. Maybe sometim...This sounds like a great beginning. Maybe sometime you can continue it. Good job.Vikihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-87694734237682434722011-02-02T18:05:07.429-08:002011-02-02T18:05:07.429-08:00Loved the ending on this. Good one! :)Loved the ending on this. Good one! :)faithhttp://articlesoffaithandfancy.wordpress.com/2011/01/31/jamisons-letters/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-64492632014410982712011-02-01T07:06:06.603-08:002011-02-01T07:06:06.603-08:00What oh what possibly could be in those letters! G...What oh what possibly could be in those letters! Great stuff that screams to answered! btw-what a charming header photo....very nice!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-34301001978584671682011-01-31T13:37:04.102-08:002011-01-31T13:37:04.102-08:00As your other readers said, "What happens?&qu...As your other readers said, "What happens?" Was it her grandma?Gutsy Livinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02226653890127738115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-57817682353153187742011-01-31T08:55:24.017-08:002011-01-31T08:55:24.017-08:00Good idea to bring a photo into the mix. I got stu...Good idea to bring a photo into the mix. I got stuck on the letters...<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-54415002147608621002011-01-31T07:43:18.284-08:002011-01-31T07:43:18.284-08:00Absolutely..you have given us so many sparks to li...Absolutely..you have given us so many sparks to light up the story in our heads..like the little fairy gathering up the drop of light..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-48031843735632624302011-01-30T18:30:15.051-08:002011-01-30T18:30:15.051-08:00oh, this is so intriguing ... it leaves me wanting...oh, this is so intriguing ... it leaves me wanting more!Johttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03270665398498790951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-60378450693271844902011-01-30T18:16:21.084-08:002011-01-30T18:16:21.084-08:00Very intriguing. You ignite all sorts of thoughts ...Very intriguing. You ignite all sorts of thoughts on where this could go. Great work.<br />xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-20592760415900042572011-01-30T17:12:05.558-08:002011-01-30T17:12:05.558-08:00I love the use of the photo in the stack of letter...I love the use of the photo in the stack of letters. I like the way you used the prompt, I'd love to know more of this story! KatKathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-50515268187555530102011-01-30T15:55:08.390-08:002011-01-30T15:55:08.390-08:00WEll, youve done it now! You've gotten us so ...WEll, youve done it now! You've gotten us so curious that you have to keep writing!!Judiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-43251650127724871562011-01-30T15:50:45.208-08:002011-01-30T15:50:45.208-08:00great job. I loved it.great job. I loved it.Dazee Dreamerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323163539682131873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-89952976967013305062011-01-30T12:19:36.630-08:002011-01-30T12:19:36.630-08:00Well, now I just want to know more.Well, now I just want to know more.Jeaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04810126999695733332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-39880574537724305762011-01-30T11:26:41.122-08:002011-01-30T11:26:41.122-08:00Forgot to click the follow button - sorry - E :)
...Forgot to click the follow button - sorry - E :) <br /><br />------------<br />Elysabeth Eldering<br />Author of the Junior Geography Detective Squad, 50-state, mystery, trivia series<br /><br />Where will the adventure take you next?<br /><br />http://jgdsseries.blogspot.com<br />http://jgdsseries.weebly.comelysabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07052446855668120700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-1537955010195971932011-01-30T11:25:32.567-08:002011-01-30T11:25:32.567-08:00Cool - picking up on a past live of some sort. Th...Cool - picking up on a past live of some sort. The only problem I had with your beginning - and this is not anything big but can be fixed in a jiffy is that you shifted POV - you went from third person - she - to first person - I - The second paragraph can be easily fixed back to She throughout and I think it makes the story a bit more intriguing as you now have three "she" persons to wonder about - Jane, mom and the narrator. My guess is if you expand this out that Jane in the past will be your narrator in the present. Good job though - and hopefully you will explore this more. - E :) <br /><br />------------<br />Elysabeth Eldering<br />Author of the Junior Geography Detective Squad, 50-state, mystery, trivia series<br /><br />Where will the adventure take you next?<br /><br />http://jgdsseries.blogspot.com<br />http;//jgdsseries.weebly.comelysabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07052446855668120700noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1782670332245315517.post-37502200496667365762011-01-30T10:56:06.847-08:002011-01-30T10:56:06.847-08:00A well told story. My mind filled in the blanks b...A well told story. My mind filled in the blanks by a story that really happened. Sometimes so amazaing.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.com