Belatedly, here is my offering with the prompt in bold. If you have trouble reading this, ask a teenager to interpret, as I have written my story in text message format.
Me: sup, dude?
Him: nothin, just chillin at home.
Me: want to hang out?
Him: can’t.
Me: y not?
Him: sort of want to be alone.
Me: kk. how bout tomrow?
Him: idk if I can.
Me: hey, is somethin goin on here?
Him: no, yeah, kinda.
Me: like what?
Him: we need to take a break. It’s me, not u. I just don’t want to be with anyone right now.
Me: r u textin me a Dear John ltr?
Him: yeah, I guess so.
Oops! I sort of went over the word limit. If you don't count the "me" and "him", I'm only one word over. Anyway, please stop over at Jenny's by clicking above or on the logo below.
Hope u r havin a gr8 week!
10 comments:
dumb idiot guy!!!! "it's not you, it's me". the ultimate excuse.
Great job.
Very contemporary...well done...Peace and blessings
Very, very cool take on this prompt! Clever of you to make it a text. It's easier to break up when you don't have to look the other party in the eye! (Coward).
Great work!
Namaste..........cj
E-mail break-ups are bad enough...now I guess texting is the way cowards do it. Good job telling the story.
I really enjoyed ur post .. infact.. have experienced the same quite a number of times.. but the fact remains.. that with guys, its just a phase at times..they Do want taht time alone.. only that they dont know when to snap out of it :|
Perfectly fitted for the prompt and the 21st century...nicely done !!!
OMGosh, what kind of a stinker texts a "Dear John"?
I can tell you have teenagers.
Everything short and quick.
Oh, this is great! Sad to say this probably WILL be the new "Dear John" letter....or as in this case, Dear Johnette!
ur centus is gr8
=)
LOL...ROFL...U R 2 GR8!
Great, great use of the prompt.
This is definitely the most clever one I've read!
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