Welcome to my contribution to Saturday Centus, sponsored by Jenny Matlock - Off On My Tangent. She posts several memes during the week with which we can play along. On Saturdays, she gives a prompt and challenges us to write a short story, 100 words or less, using the prompt as the topic. AFTER you read my entry, and, give me a thumbs up or thumbs down, please click on the logo below and go visit Jenny. There are others there, just like me, with short stories that are quick reads, and very entertaining!
The theme of this week's Centus is in bold lettering.
It seemed like yesterday that I watched Tommy dance in the Halloween parade. He was a great scarecrow and played the part well.
Who knew that a week later, he would be diagnosed with a rare blood disorder. We saw many doctors who performed all kinds of tests and still they were unable to offer a cure.
Tommy was getting weaker by the day. Family and friends arrived for support. We prayed as we laid our hands on him. I fell asleep next to him and awoke the next morning to a sweet voice whispering,
“Mommy, I’m hungry.”
It was the 11th anniversary of the happiest day of my life.
Thanks for stopping by. Have a wonderful weekend!
23 comments:
Sniffle,sniffle. I hope (and I don't) that this is a true story?
I'm glad this had a happy ending. For many it doesn't. Good take on this prompt.
Any mom's heart would be touched by this one.
Nice.
=)
I was NOT expecting a happy ending! I thought you were going for sad and macabre - oh wait, that's just me!
I have no idea if there is any truth in this post, but it is beautiful! Those are truly words that would stay with a mother forever!
Malisa
Hope and heart all rolled into one!
Wow! I love Tommy and I don't even know him.
So sad until the great ending!
This is so beautiful...
embracing weeds
I love a happy ending!!
Surely the greatest words a mother could ever hear. Wonderful, touching use of the prompt. Kat
Ihope also that this was a true happy ending Mine is where I hope to be in 11 years My divorce is imminent so I need to prepare to not look back
Wow, a powerful post to be sure! Really well done! Thanks for sharing!
Wow! What a challenge, and you took it on beautifully :)
This one certainly grabs the heartstrings! Very well written.
Written like a hopeful parent. Good work.
So happy it had a happy ending.
powerful and moving. well done!
That was powerful and I'm so glad the ending was happy.
Great job!
The laying on of healing hands. Powerful! Wonderful and joyous post!~Ames
What a touching story! I feel guilty whining about my gall bladder being cut/sucked out!
What a touching story! I feel guilty whining about my gall bladder being cut/sucked out!
Oh man. This made me all teary eyed. What a neat and different use of this prompt.
I wrote this prompt in honor of Mr. Jenny's and my 11th Anniversary which was on this date!
What a heart-warming story for a great Anniversary.
Thank you for linking.
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